Post 8- Writing a Thesis

A thesis statement focuses on the idea of the paper you are writing about. How to begin is the problem. You have so much jumping around in your head but how to you transform it to paper or to a word document? The thesis statement should tell the reader what you writing about. When you begin writing you want to say, it comes out just like you speak. Bad grammer is the word. I want to convience my readers that this university need to offer more night classes that benefit students who are in other programs besides nursing. This fall quarter I'm in one night class. The problem is the other classes I need to take are not offered during night hours. How do I transform this into a thesis statement? Signed Clueless.. Thats me.

Post 7- Evaluating Peers

I'm very nervous evaluating my fellow classmates' paper. I will have to read what the writer writes and clarified if there argument about the topic persuaude me or comment that I'm not reachable. I think I'm capable of just proofreading. As far a me being a writer, I get stuck on writing about things. I don't know where to begin and I shut down. In saying that to evaluate someone by not saying great job, I have to go more into details to ask questions and to give comments. All topics chosen for document one are great topics to talk about. Now it's time for me to read and grade. Good luck everyone.

Post 6 - Document Topic

The research for the topic of night scheduling is harder than I thought. When researching in google I found more things about game scheduling and high school scheduling. I'm sure that this may be a great topic one day to discuss for students who desire to take more night classes if offered. My research is due and I need more sources.

Post 5- Authority

Our brain is a tool which holds a lot of information. In saying that writing begins from the knowledge you store in your brain, your thoughts. When writing with authority you give a verifiable details of events or knowledge. Authority is focus on the writer. Writing with authority gives you power over your readers. The writer is in control as the thoughts or research is written. You read what the writer writes and you believe that the information is true, gives the writer authority of what is written.

Post 4- Document 1

My topic for Doc.1 is about night scheduling. My reason for choosing this topic is based on having more night classes to fix my needs towards receiving my degree. I had to take most of my classes online. I did not do well in my Introduction to Finance class, actually I received an "F". Introduction to Finance is offer on campus but only during the morning hours. I will have to retake this class in order to graduate. I think online classes are okay but some of the classes I need to listen to the lecture in order to grasp what is being taught. I wanted to write about night scheduling in hopes to make a difference for myself and others who wants to succeed and in hopes of expressing my concerns to South University to fulfill the needs of their students.

Post 3 - Document 1 Topic

The presentations given during class was very interesting. Each group gave you information that was very helpful and made you think about it. Both presentation about the Bookstore was informative. I usually rent books if needed. I did not realize that a lot of students has concerns about the pricing of the books. I understand the concerns of the students far as buying something you may not use again. I feel like scheduling more night classes are important also. For example I'm majoring in Business, I need to take Accounting III. It's offered but not at night. I understand teachers are limited but the school agenda is to provide or help me seek an education.

Post 2 - A recent argument

I had an argument with a co-worker, she wanted me to handle a personal matter for her boyfriend. I refused to do what she asked, she said " I hope the same thing happens again to your car". My son was in a accident recently in my car, a vehicle forced him off the road and causing the axle to break on my car. I thought her comment was not caused for and very cruel. I let that comment affect my whole day but I had to interact with her because we have to work together. Therefore I went through my day upset but nice. I really wanted to clock out and punch her in mouth. I am very thankful for changes in my life and thankful for maturity.

Post 1- Experience At South University

South University should offer more night programs for those who are working and is not enrolled in a nursing program. South University inform there students of events that will take place on campus, I think that is nice. The school can make my experience with interacting with other students or faculty members by having their picnics on Saturdays instead of during the week, at times I can not attend. If I had more Professors like Mr. Hamon would be a pleasure. South University should add a cafe or small restaurant that serve sandwiches or salads for those who come from work and get home late. Also South University can improve on their computer systems or browsers.